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Inspiration for Pool Party...
Feb 9th, 2010, 6:09am
 
Hey guys (and gals),
I found this story on Literotica and thought some of you might enjoy it. It's actually really long, but I linked to the chapters that I figured would be of most interest. Specifically, a mother and daughter (who have already gone black at this point in the story) invite several of their high school age lovers over to their house for a pool party. The guys and girls have fun in the pool while hubby/dad barbaques a few feet away, completely oblivious. By the end of the chapter he finds out what's going on. Thought it might help to tide everyone over till Pool Party hits the site.
Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=55114

I linked to the chapters about the pool party, but the whole story is extremely hot. Definitely worth the read if you get the chance...
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Reply #1 - Feb 9th, 2010, 8:45pm
 
If no one sees it yet the Ballet Club series was the initial inspiration for the Summers girls. I love that story.
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Reply #2 - Feb 9th, 2010, 10:02pm
 
ThePiT wrote on Feb 9th, 2010, 8:45pm:
If no one sees it yet the Ballet Club series was the initial inspiration for the Summers girls. I love that story.

So now you should animate it! Can you have 70,000 frames done by next week?

GrinCheesy
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Reply #3 - Feb 9th, 2010, 10:14pm
 
Oh man! Ballet Club has been one of my all time favorites for years! I think I caught onto it before all the chapters were even out. Amazing when all my interests come together like this. I even wrote to the author once or twice and practically begged for another story, but tragically that writer barely ever did anything else.

I think the connection had occurred to me once or twice, though Stormbringer did some beach and pool related work as well. Doctor Bitch and June Bugs come to mind.

Anyway, I highly recommend Ballet Club. Er, the story I mean.
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Reply #4 - Feb 10th, 2010, 4:22am
 
Cool. I'm glad I'm not the only one who enjoyed that. To be honest, I did see quite a few similarities to the Pit's stories, which is the reason I thought it might be of interest to the people on this site. Does anyone else have any other stories they could reccomend? Maybe we could start a thread. Any thoughts?
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Reply #5 - Feb 10th, 2010, 8:18am
 
I this story illustrated? I've seen a couple of references on 2 of Pit's drawings refering to The Summers Interracial Pool Party. If anyone, especially The Pit is aware, please let us know...The Pit is the best ever at what he does..many thanks...
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Reply #6 - Feb 12th, 2010, 12:43am
 
Indeed, PIT is the Wolverine of interracial pornography art. Had to nerd it up just a little there.

Originally, my favorite author was a guy called Stardog Champion, and I loved his interracial work, but then he got more and more into incest and older women, and he lost me.

His stories are mostly mental. He writes about what goes on inside the girl's head while she's being seduced. It's good stuff in my opinion. I strongly recommend "Crossed Wires, Crossed Boundaries" but he has an enormous body of work from 2000 right up to today found here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3171&page=submissions

Jordon Lynn, though sadly retired, has great stories like Faith Debased and Starters Only, listed here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=84916&page=submissions

Someone calling himself simply BBC had three good series years ago:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=137868&page=submissions...

A writing buddy of mine, Bazzz:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=573746&page=submissions...

And finally, well, I guess I should list my own:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1024967&page=submission...

They have censored me too many times there, and they even add typos I can prove I did not have in the original, but it was a way to get my ideas out there at least.
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Reply #7 - Feb 12th, 2010, 3:24am
 
Those storis sound great.

Do you know of any interacial stories involving sport?? Say where a bitchy white girl takes on a black guy/ girl at basketball, loses and pays the price. Or more stories like bitch doctor where the white woman is a bitch.

Great story suggestions. Thankx.
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Reply #8 - Feb 12th, 2010, 5:13am
 
Now that you mention it, I was really into this story for a while about a white guy in college who gets on the basketball team because he's tall, and the whole team is white, then they play an inner city college team of all black guys, and of course the black guys crush them and seduce their entire white cheerleader squad to add insult to injury, eventually getting them all pregnant so they are forced to drop out of school.

Sadly, it had almost no focus on sex at all, it just mentions all the sex that goes on somewhere else, but the white guy losing his redheaded cheerleader girlfriend to the guy who defeated and mocked him was pretty hot to me.

I've only read the first chapter, which contained everything I just mentioned, but apparently he finally added three more chapters. Hopefully my emails to him helped make that happen!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1016819&page=submission...
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Reply #9 - Feb 12th, 2010, 9:44am
 
Subjectivity13 wrote on Feb 12th, 2010, 5:13am:
Now that you mention it, I was really into this story for a while about a white guy in college who gets on the basketball team because he's tall, and the whole team is white, then they play an inner city college team of all black guys, and of course the black guys crush them and seduce their entire white cheerleader squad to add insult to injury, eventually getting them all pregnant so they are forced to drop out of school.

Sadly, it had almost no focus on sex at all, it just mentions all the sex that goes on somewhere else, but the white guy losing his redheaded cheerleader girlfriend to the guy who defeated and mocked him was pretty hot to me.

I've only read the first chapter, which contained everything I just mentioned, but apparently he finally added three more chapters. Hopefully my emails to him helped make that happen!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1016819&page=submission...


I just came across this very story a couple of months ago. Hot, but like Subjectivity said, there was little, if any, sex in it. The last few chapters take place years later after the hero (chump) of the story is married. He gets a black boss, who is in the process of seducing his wife right in front of him. I'm hoping that seduction is going to lead to a sex scene, but we'll see. Otherwise, a great story.
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Reply #10 - Feb 12th, 2010, 12:17pm
 
Hi All

If we are sharing faves:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=416420

Quite a few chapters to enjoy - but think it's been turned into a book to make 's ($$$$'s for you guys over the pond)  Angry

Would love to see the PIT invlove Dildos (hopefully the Summers girls) in his fine, fine work
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Reply #11 - Feb 12th, 2010, 6:34pm
 
Wait, IR, you're saying the guy wrote three entire chapters of seduction with no sex?! Wow, that guy's... different. I suppose that's pretty impressive character development, but I've never wanted to call a guy a cocktease before. Honestly, I feel pretty creepy about it even now.

I was so sure the new British guy wannabecuck was just posting the word "hot" on every recent thread, which was hilarious, but this time he really said something! Though I must wonder, what's with the British invasion around here?!

I never thought interracial was big outside America, since my time in England and watching BBC has made me feel that the US is a bit unique in its level of racial tension due to factors like immigration and slavery, yet I swear a full half of the people on the forums here are English. England is the only foreign country I've visited though, their culture and that of Japan being my favorites, so I really do like having so many Brits around, just a bit of a surprise.

Oh neat! I was just looking at some older stories by AnotherHotWife! Good times.
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Reply #12 - Feb 13th, 2010, 7:42pm
 
[quote author=6D4B5C545B5D4A5748574A473E0 l

I was so sure the new British guy wannabecuck was just posting the word "hot" on every recent thread, which was hilarious, but this time he really said something! Though I must wonder, what's with the British invasion around here?!

I never thought interracial was big outside America, since my time in England and watching BBC has made me feel that the US is a bit unique in its level of racial tension due to factors like immigration and slavery, yet I swear a full half of the people on the forums here are English. England is the only foreign country I've visited though, their culture and that of Japan being my favorites, so I really do like having so many Brits around, just a bit of a surprise.

Oh neat! I was just looking at some older stories by AnotherHotWife! Good times. [/quote]


Sorry about the random "hot" posts! I wanted to get the anotherhotwife link up ASAP but forum rules meant that I had to have 5 posts, so I just replied to my faves!

Also, many apologies... I looked backed and have seen a dildo (just) featured in scenes 19 and 21 in HUNT!?!? I just hope this appears earlier (BET or the elusive POOL) Roll Eyes with very descriptive thoughts of both Summers girls!

As for the British Invasion.... It's the internet - all the freaks worldwide come out to play!!!!! Think i might sell my house and move across the country to meet Freya BTW Cheesy

We are also a bit cheap though, would like at least 4 updates a week

... and relax lol
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Reply #13 - Feb 14th, 2010, 8:25am
 
Actually, I think Freya is a Brit, too.
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Reply #14 - Feb 14th, 2010, 3:06pm
 
IRaddict wrote on Feb 14th, 2010, 8:25am:
Actually, I think Freya is a Brit, too.


Yeah i think she is to, but she is in the North West of UK, I'm in Nottingham  Undecided

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